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AnnaLund2011

I am vociferously passionate about good books. And I hate adverbs.

Status update 15% - Wild Horses, by Kate Pavelle

Wild Horses - Kate Pavelle

Okay, that's an interesting way to do it. At the end of the first chapter there is a section of two-and-a-half pages of RECAP of what had already transpired...

 

It felt a lot like the novel outline, left in the body of the text.

 

Or like something you see at the beginning of a new episode of a soap—"Last week, on Alphas..."

 

Not pretty. Not impressed. Reading on, because the story is lovely. Execution? Not so much, perhaps. 

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